Hey Everybody

This text might bore you to sleep so try to stay awake. Us Michael and Diamond (Not an actual diamond) had to do a project which is what you see here it's not hard also not so easy. We are 2 students which have almost nothing alike except that we're in the same class trying to survive the final year of middle school. Hopefully theres only afew days left of school but we kept hearing that high school is even worse.

Tuesday, June 16, 2009

Diamond's changes of writing

How I feel about my writing is good, when I came to the 8Th grade I forgot some of my writing strategies that I learned from 7Th grade. In the 8Th since we had the E.L.A. test(English Language Arts), my teacher taught my class how to restate the prompt to get us started on our introduction for the essay. Another strategy I learned that help me during the S.S test (Social Studies test) my teacher taught the class was make a graphic organizer. It help me but the document in the right body paragraph and to help you set up your paragraph. I think my growth of writing has gotten better because when I was in 7Th I didn't write much. I just be writing like almost a page long and Now I had grown up and now I write more than I usually do. I learn how to use transition words in a essay. I think my writing level improve since 7Th grade and now. One reason I think my writing is better because I put more details and effort in my work. And also think my writing improve is that I learned how to take stuff out of the text and us it in my own words my own example. As a writer I think I gotten better but I still need some work on my writing to my thing sound better.

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What We Will Truely Miss of U.N.M.S.

We will truely miss:

The comedy of the nice jokes that every one comes up with and the nice come backs.

The friends that we've made and other people through the three years of school and the fun we had with then even though some of them hates one of us.

The school and the fun activities like the school picnic with the water fights and the sports like basketball, football, and kickball too.

The senior activities like prom when we were dancing the cha-cha slide whie the boat was rocking side to side it was awsome some people were still crazy the next day after prom.

The teachers and how they sucessfully tried to make the work fun and actually educational.

BOOM!!

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BOOM

Graduation is over

Everything
gone

Happiness
Freinds
Excitment
Inocence
Popularity
People
Buddies
Hope
Togetherness

All
GONE